By moriah13 Aug, 2008 mmm...I like your poem. It is a dark one! please don't commit suicide though...if that is you speaking in this poem. you have a gift...so live and use it for good.
By Nataraju Gaganam09 Aug, 2008 Sorry Shannon,
The character of your poem is doing an unexcusable WRONG.
No one likes to wish someone to leave this world. I dont think, anyone has the right to destroy himself. We are not born out of HIS will, so we have to leave this world out of HIS will again. How can you dissapoint HIM.
Troubles & Misery are a part of the TEST. Dont be a coward to return him a BLANK paper.
Give a little smile & a ray of hope to your character in the poem & then see how an entirely new WORLD appears.
MAY GOD BLESS YOU DEAR.
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